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Alas, I don't have the patience to wait for the OC thread to hit 80 pages before breaking backlog. As I lay dormant, the lackeys of the Holy Empire of Techtrolls are celebrating what they call a victory of what they call the working Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Nanoha... And the OC Thread has been lamblasted for turning the series into something completely different from the original, but while they seem sympathetic to our cause, those /b/tards have no understanding of Outer Cadia's true nature...
Neither party knows what their deeds either in bringing in all these alien rules and regulations to Cadia, or slugging frivolous dismissals at our fair practices, are doing to our great nation!
My time is drying up. My techniques have failed me.
The Techtrolls may think that I have been defeated. That with Anita around I am no longer amongst the Khracky...
But they are gravely, mistaken.
The Bluecheesium and me are all that remains, but all that is necessary. For together we will raise a great army. Together we will show the Multiverse's downtrodden who the real enemy is. The Techtrolls promises us a workable and fair framework, but in the slums of Outer Cadia the homeless and hungry catgirls know the truth.
They have been forgotten! THEY HAVE NOTHING!
BUT!
Their ANGER!
We will take that spark and start a fire that will become A GREAT CONFLAGRATION!
Peace!
Through!
PIZZA!
[Commencing operation...]
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Originally Posted by Aaron008R
~How deep can you dig?~
~How much effort can you give?~
~How much passion can you show?~
~For the one and only OC Thread?~
About 80 pages...
BACKLOG... BREAKER. |
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Yes you will be of great use to me...
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Originally Posted by Aaron008R
I assume you like UBW way more than Fate route, huh?  |
Who doesn't? I actually Rebuilt the Fate timeline creating a second one where Saber stays instead of returning, and I think it's more fun than the original "canon" ending...
Btw, in case you guys don't know, for the OC Thread, instead of the Fate timeline, the Canon timeline involves a modfied Heaven's End timeline with elements from Fate and Unlimited Blade Works. Hence KhaxFate being the "canon pairing".
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Originally Posted by Aaron008R
THAT WAS UNCALLED FOOOOOOoooooooorrrrrrrrr!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*me is punched to the moon*
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Kha & Anita evil
at the disappearing Aaron.
Keikakudoori...
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Originally Posted by Aaron008R
So she's tsundere here instead of compulsive toughie-girl? 
But then, this is certainly interesting. I'm sure getting this ending i gonna be very rewarding. 
(Yes, I want you to write a Kharoko scenario. Nao. >3) |
That was outdated actually. From what I gather, Keroko's has Kyou's sharpness but is rounded by her unique level of softness combined with Tomoyo's Genki, and this description doesn't even cut it!
It's different yet the same.
I'm still thinking of it, but CLANNAD is playing a heavy influence at the moment
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Originally Posted by Aaron008R
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>.>
<.<
Kha: Ikuze!
Anita: Yosh!
Both: TWIN RABU SHIFTTO!
DAI HAATO PAAANCH!!!
*sends Aaron flying past the moon*
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Originally Posted by Aaron008R
But of course.
Like it or not, the OC-Club Danchou's influence affects all. |
Ah-hahaha... Stop that, you're embarassing me...
(Keikakudoori...)
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Originally Posted by Aaron008R
Let me be honest. When I read this months ago. I was going thru a lot of crap in school that many should be familiar with.
And your awesomely scathing snide comments didn't help AT ALL.
I was pissed. Very, VERYROYALLY FRICKIN PISSED at how you seem to have the gall to disregard my painstakingly established details whilst using MY OC for your works. I'm sure you know that I want my characters to be as accurate to my version as possible if other people use them. And what's more, I make every single effort to be civil and polite to you, as well as helping you in your project. And what do I get? I do not get along with people with the expectancy of a reward. But I do not like attitude being thrown at my face on an almost regular basis either. And your attitude just happened to be perfect in rubbing off me the extremely wrong way then.
I understand that this may not be your intention. But the way things were, I was absolutely in no mood to take attitude I didn't like; intentional or not. For once I do not to give a damn whether you intended it or not. You pissed me off, period. This is actually one of the reasons why I took a break from OC since I might retort with something violent like disassociating my works permanently from yours, which is hardly logical and civil at all.
Anyway, I let it down by now. No hard feelings, okay?
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*whistles*
Explosive.
Better out than in.
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Originally Posted by Aaron008R
Iyada. |
Oh yes.
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Originally Posted by Aaron008R
My sentiments exactly... =_______=
IXA BELT: Re-di-i.
"Henshin."
Fi-su-to on.
KHHAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!! 
RETURN THAT LIFE TO GOD!!!!
IXA BELT: I-ku-sa Ka-ri-ba-a Ra-i-su A-pu.
*JUDGMENT SLASH >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> KHA* |
You cannot kill the Messiah!
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Originally Posted by Aaron008R
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Mada, Mada!
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Originally Posted by Aaron008R
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YOUR WORST NIGHTMARE!!!
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Originally Posted by Aaron008R
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:3
>3
Now this genderbend is better, though. |
Indeed, I like Yuuna a lot. Even wins a lot of points in the FF Thread, and THAT's something, considering his rep there.
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Originally Posted by Aaron008R
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*salutes with respect*
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Originally Posted by Aaron008R
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Reminds me of the time Arisa dragged the cast to Comiket, and Keroko picked up a GauronXSousuke Yaoi doujin. It was AWESOME. XD
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Originally Posted by Aaron008R
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Too bad he got dropped...
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Originally Posted by Aaron008R
>.>
<.<
Jiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii~~~~~……………….
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More like, HELL YEAH!
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Originally Posted by Aaron008R
[Setsuna]Gun...dam
Gundam...
Gunda-am...
*reaches up*
GUN-DAAAAAAAAAMMMMMMMMMMM!!!!!!!!!!![/Setsuna]
And yeah...
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Hmm... Mm, mm, mm... Ha... Haha... AH HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! AH HAHAHAHAHAAA!!!
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Originally Posted by Aaron008R
But please don’t get carried away…>.>
Official Hayaurion is not my intention…<.<
(Actually, from what can be seen in IRC, it can be surmised that Goose shall not accept any other pairing for Hayate if it regards my OC’s…. >_____<)
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Shiptease Aaron, Shippu-teesu.
Doing her very well thank you very much. See? She's all hot and sweaty and asking for more.
*RUNS AT THE LUDICRIOUS SPEED OF TIME*
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Originally Posted by Aaron008R
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Keikakudoori...
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Originally Posted by Aaron008R
Quite an amount of love for Fate-chan there...>.>
:3 :3 :3
>3 |
I wouldn't settle for any less.
:3
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Originally Posted by Aaron008R
ORE NO HISSATSU WAZA!!! PART 2!!!!!!!
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"The Pawn is out-performing the Knight, Cleric."
"I don't want to hear that coming from an immortal witch."
"Hmph. "
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Originally Posted by Aaron008R
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Come on, all of Mount Hyjal got blown to smithereens, but that just made the battle all the more GAR.
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Originally Posted by Aaron008R
Blame 7arcs for not providing a better solo pic.=_=
IN any case, I did get another pic. Official at that. I’ll add it too.:3
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Which reminds me, how is Raid Slash coming along? I need more images as the Rebuilt profiles need them. A lot. :3
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Originally Posted by Aaron008R
Wrong. Balmung is no melee spell.
It does THIS!!!
And believe me, swinging it around is no mean feat. Hardly something you’d use in fighting melee.
*me runs from Negima manga readers*
A melee range attack is something that should really be avoided in favour of a nice strong shield then getting away as quick as possible, using Vita’s copied spell as a distraction (just add a blinding light to it and you’ve got yourself a flashbang.) |
Nonsense! Hayate's dangerous in melee because the closer you are to her, the better she can freeze you. And the way a 100% ranged mage fights is by kiting, and trust me I know the Kiting technique very well.
Expect much Hayate awesome when she finally decides to sortie from Rebuilt.
:3
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Originally Posted by Aaron008R
WANT MOAR VITAXFELIX!!!
:3
*RUNS LIKE HELL* |
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Originally Posted by Aaron008R
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Originally Posted by Keroko
Ahh... that might be a problem. That the Cleric-Knights never had a Primarch I knew, but hey only answer to the Seiou? The Primarch's are second-in-command to the Seiou only, the word of a Primarch is the word of the Seiou, basically. Having an entire unit that doesn't follow the Primarch's orders would be messing with Fall of an Empire.
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The Sankt Kaiser can just tell them to follow said Primarch's lead, which they do, since they are also part of the palace guard. Besides, Meister Chef knows when to follow orders and when to go it alone.
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Originally Posted by Keroko
Yes, a lot more. Though I suspect Heavens Feel to top that, reason being I never really liked Rin all that much (the great star in UBW for me was defnetely Archer).
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I liked both.
:3
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Originally Posted by Keroko
Thank you.  |
*backs away nervously from t3h Trapu*
:3
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Originally Posted by Keroko
<_<
>_>
Me too...
*runs*
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Keikakudoori...
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Originally Posted by Keroko
*nods while watching Aaron being chased by anembarassed Nanoha and Keroko*
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Hayate: Gambatte, Oji-chan~~!
Fate: Good luck.
Kha:
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Originally Posted by Keroko
Thank you. |
This mental image is getting VERY unnerving... >.>
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Originally Posted by Tormenk
Hmm. I misread that as hugging his knees in a corner of the Lourve.
And Anita's a villian now? |
Erm, no. -_-
Sa nee...?
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Originally Posted by XenahortCharybdis
Last point...Very true. Very, very true. Things would have gotten wayyy out of hand in both cases. In StrikerS we'd see the TSAB taking out almost 3 times more Drones than in the real story no thanks to the abundance of godly snipers, and we'd have a much better plan, which would result in a more clinical, if faster, and maybe more awesome win. Kudos on that of course goes to our OC tacticians, on-site and off-site ones alike.
While in As, Reinforce Eins might have gotten killed, I swear it. Just get a diversion, and have Chief sneak up under Active Camo... *snaps fingers* you know the drill.
And then...poor Kha, he wouldn't exist like we know him. And one of my OCs would be pretty heartbroken too, if an insane person could be heartbroken
Aggressive Self Defence, you might as well call that a Counterattack, saves you the trouble of thinking up a euphemism |
I seriously don't think so. I follow the policy of Hitsuzen, so not matter how many OCs we throw into the mix, events will turn out exactly the same.
Let's say OC's were involved from Day 1. Which is the case for Rebuilt. Charlene Anzelotte works up with Fate, and therefore counteracts the Nanoha and Keroko pair in Season 1. Her reasons for doing so were only revealed in Nanoha/Cente Gravia. Kha was involved in A's, as the Cleric working in the shadows against the TSAB's actions. He would NEVER have let Chief, or any of the OFM, do whatever'd they'd do, because he would want to defeat her without causing any casualties. Laugh if you want, but Kha is the type that does things the hard way, because in his heart and from the whisperings of the Naaru, he knows its the right way. Sorry for your Troll worshipping, but if the OFM were involved in A's, Cleric < Chief in this universe. That vigilante disrupted every possible "efficient" movement of the OCs pre-StrikerS as he felt that what he did was right. And when Nanoha, Keroko and Fate finally overcame the Book, the Cleric knew he was vindicated.
Otherwise things would not have turned out as it is for StrikerS.
I don't care if it disrupts continuity to Alpha; I Rebuilt Nanoha to make it work, but even with my mistakes it was
NOT AT THE EXPENSE OF THE ORIGINAL FLAVOR! 
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Originally Posted by PhoenixFlare
Quick! History is about to be written, and justice to be done! The Sankt Kaiser's identity will finally be lifted from the mists of mysteries! |
Not when the Sankt Kaiser doesn't even want her identity to be known...
However she does long for someone to look at her not as Empress Vivio, not as Saber, not as Sankt Kaiser, but just Sakura Zaki. Which Kha does.
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Originally Posted by PhoenixFlare
I busted my brains a few times writing that.
Revelation from Chrono imminent! ... In Chapter 11.
Small note on the Pentateuch Archive, in any case (kind of forgotten to explain this):
Spoiler for Pentateuch Archive:
A high-security confidential collection of important data and information locked by five selected personnel/members using five different authentication mechanisms: password (at least 16 characters), retinal scan, voice recognition, thumb print, and DNA verification (the interface can be made to accept several small drops of blood/lock of hair for immediate sequencing). Hence, the name Pentateuch Archive.
Because it's usually meant to seal away highly important data, the sequence of seals are known only to those who participate in the process. Unlocking the Archive would require repeating the same order of persons who locked it, though the authentication mechanisms can be made to accommodate for unforeseen circumstances (such as death of a person, which eliminates thumb print and retinal scan from use), with a minimal requirement of passing three out of five of the mechanisms.
Regardless, the system is sensitive enough to log in attempts to unlock it, and would self-destruct in the case that it was forcefully breached through hacking or inability to fulfill the unlock requirements without required time-frame. A second chance is given in the event that the system was not forcefully opened, possibly by accidental activation, but that was all before the message contained within would be eliminated from the memory forever should another failed attempt ensued.
Nothing much about the storyline except to tell how important the content is. |
Interesting...
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Originally Posted by PhoenixFlare
Canon would like to prove otherwise.
魔導師の食事 - A mage’s diet
For mages, Mana in the atmosphere is linked together in an organ, the “Linker core”, and stored within their body. For quick replenishment, a balanced diet consisting of sugars, carbohydrates and proteins is essential, as are a variety of vitamins and minerals to maintain a healthy body. Therefore out of necessity, mages undergoing hard training during their early growth period eat a much larger diet compared to an ordinary person. Furthermore, pasta and other noodle-type foods are easily digested, so these types of food, known as ｢Loading Foods」, are loved by many mages, since they allow for quick energy and Mana replenishment.
You'd notice that Mana is generated within the Linker Core, and replenishment comes primarily from food and rest. While Vivian may not be a glutton, Mana is a form of energy that has its source from food, which exemplifies the fact that it's a form of physical energy that can be changed to power normal metabolism (law of energy conservation and the first law of thermodynamics). And such energies are consumed by the cells to do work; the more you have it, the more they work, and eventually they either become resistant or die.
If Vivian has "delayed aging" simply because she's brimming with Mana, Hayate is a potential candidate for such "divine manifestation", because her mana pool is large enough (SS). Yet, Hayate is not, so your argument is invalid.
And really, if Mana can be used to do everything, one wonders why there is no supra-godlike mage characters (SSS+) in entire Mid-childa. It can even be that they perish faster because of too much Mana. |
That's assuming magical processing creates free radicals.
Besides, I do assume that the "dearth" of SSS is only artificial. Such powerful mages lead battalions of S-rank mages from the front in places where they are needed most, the Rim Worlds. You don't need such awesome individuals Corewards so thats why in canon we hardly see any of it. BUT, the sheer fact that the TSAB is an absolute power means that these mages MUST exist.
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Originally Posted by Wild Goose
Aaron's been putting it forward, Reiji's been hating on this pairing, and I just ship Hayaurion because it's pseudocest. Well actually I ship Hayaurion for shits and giggles, and it's kinda fun to see Aaron go all swirly. It keeps me from entering AbareKillerGoose Mode.
Epic battle! Burning spirits seeking the maiden's pure heart! The epic of the month!
Aurion vs Grandis, in the battle for Hayate's heart, soul and door!
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*applause*
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Originally Posted by Wild Goose
I would also like to point out that delayed aging means you'd spend a longer time as a loli. Take David Weber's Honorverse. 20-30 year olds stuck in 12 year old loli bodies thanks to delayed aging. (On the other hand it means taht 50-60 year olds can look like in their late 20s so I suppose it balances ). Basically what does that mean?
Nobody takes you seriously until you're at least 35 or 40 People look at you and go, "Meh, just a kid." Are you sure you want Vivian to have that happen to her, Comar?
I'm also personally not keen on the name Vivian because it reminds me of my onee-chan. |
Then again, how are we to be sure the definition of "young" is the same as now? Puberty has been pushed backwards, so back then, a 'loli' might be a new adult.
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Originally Posted by Tempest Dynasty
Hell yeah. You should definitely give the series a watch. I LOVE the ED. Imagine Vivio having to live with Noland acting eerily similar to Kogarashi.
Bwahaha. |
Wow this is so full of LULing WIN.
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Originally Posted by Tempest Dynasty
Oh yes. Kha, have you ever considered a change in uniform for you genderbent form? Like... this one?
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Unfortunately, Kha's conservativism will get in the way of this daring outfit.
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Originally Posted by Tempest Dynasty
Hmm. This sounds interesting. I'm really starting to like this idea of the Primarch. If Noland is the favored son of the Sankt Kaiser...
Well damn. Noland really does look like to be the Horus of the Belkan Empire.
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Until I can work it out, I'd try to contain that...
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Originally Posted by Tempest Dynasty
This is where the ambiguity and vagueness of Noland's history comes in handy. As I've said before, the truth could have been changed, warped, or misrepresented by historians writing the matter down. Thanks to this haziness, Noland's history can be easily modified to fit into just about anyone's story.
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I'm not good with spells, but all this ranking does make it a little too quantified. I prefer descriptives rather than ranks and such.
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Originally Posted by Reiji Tabibito
Is Sophiarcas fluff acceptable...? I can do that...
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>.>
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Originally Posted by Aaron008R
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Like I said, you have much use to me...
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Originally Posted by Aaron008R
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I'M TRYING!!!
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Originally Posted by Aaron008R
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Kha: Er... This is starting to look a little dangerous...
Fate:
(smiling but emitting evil aura) But this is so fun...
Kha is tamed. >.>
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Originally Posted by Aaron008R
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NUUUUUUUUU~! 
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EXPROZION!
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Originally Posted by Tk3997
Indeed... *shifty eyes*
We've been over this before...
Spoiler for Armor Lesson Re-Dux:
THIS is armor:
So is this:
And this sure as hell is!
This?!
This is pretty dress!
Know the difference troops it could save your life!
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-_-
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Originally Posted by Tk3997
O'Neil often behaves something like a ten year old in a 50 year olds body He gets bored easily and well:
Yeah...
Do it yourself that's how you get stronger!
Oh well yeah, if you don't get your lazy ass in gear that's a given.
haha well I feel the same way, but I have a feeling I'll have to accept some spoilers since your probably going to be asking me about stuff you're doing with my chars or what I have planned. |
OK.
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Originally Posted by Tk3997
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While somewhat cute if you do that again I'm going to have to hurt you; just to give fair notice.
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for Aaron.
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Originally Posted by Keroko
I know, but there are more peacefull ways of doing so then what happened in the anime. Hayate won't stand for her knights to go into battle with people from the bureau, already eliminating combat. After that, we would have time to research it. Also note that the program took control because Hayate was in a state of despair, if Hayate was fully concious, then regaining control would be much easier. At the very least they could relocate everyone to a safe place, like an uninhabited world, and commence the operation, having the Arc en Ciel on stand-by in case things go wrong.
Of course, that is assuming there really is no other option. At that time they were sort of hard-pressed to stay alive, they didn't really have the time to figure out a good solution. With time and effort, it could very well have been possible to rewrite the Yami no Sho and revert the damage done to it, reverting it back to the Yaten no Sho. Yuuno did have more information on the Yaten no Sho then even Reinforce had.
Also, on a minor note, actually feeding the Yami no Sho also speeds up the tempo it eats its host. Not feeding it is actually delaying he entre ordeal.
Of course, this is all just baseless theorycrafting. |
Just as much as we have OCs on the good side, there are even MORE OCs on the evil side...
*looks at the entire list of villains in The League that goes on forever*
...so it will balance...
:3
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Originally Posted by Evangelion Xgouki
Alright...time for my weekly
WEEKEND BACKLOG BREAKER
...or maybe I should call it the Aaron backlog Breaker this time... |
Weekly?! Weekly breakers are for the WEAK!
*is bished*
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Originally Posted by Evangelion Xgouki
I think SaSword is a better pet since he's so small and hard to hit. Not to mention the insanity that would ensue then they're trying to get him off |
*imagines SaSword scrabling up target Lock's skirt, or squeezing into the cleavage of target Rogue's chest.*
Yup the insanity.
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Originally Posted by Jimmy C
To concentrate their forces like that, they'd have to assume the Wolkies are in Uminari instead of somewhere else on the planet. Why would they assume that? If they had to spread out across even Japan alone, there'd hardly be any more people in Uminari than there were in the anime.
One hitch. How are they going to awaken the Book without feeding it? That's actually why I labelled this plan as most risky. Not that it was awaekend in a populated area.
And none of it seemed to have any hope. Everything in A's seemed to give the impression that the Book was not only corrupted, but corrupted in such a way that undoing or avoiding the corruption was impossible. Like someone purposefully designed it in such a way, like a certain anime studio for example...
Another mistranslation again? I recall one of Yuuno's briefings from the Library that the Book will consume its host if it isn't fed with magic from other mages. It does consume its host after it awakens, but that's a different event.
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Hmm lots of valid points here. Good thing I don't exactly run into them.
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Originally Posted by Comartemis
The fact that the Wolks show up pretty frequently in Uminari should be a pretty damn big hint that they live in the area, or that there is something of interest to them in the area. They engaged Nanoha and the rest, what, two or three times in the same city? Someone would've picked up on that. Sure the first time they were after Nanoha's linker core, but why would they have come back once they got that? And that's not even counting the bureau forces they dispatched in that area prior to Nanoha's involvement.
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The thing is, most of the Wolkies' movements were stealthed and rendered untrackable. While we saw many Uminari attacks, the fact is the Wolkies' scattered their attacks over many dimensions, and depening on the teleportation speeds they could be +/- 5 dimensions from Earth. I agree that this is the hint they have and they might actually be spread rather thin.
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Originally Posted by Keroko
You ever had the urge to write something after just seeing an image? No wait... most of us do. I did so this morning, after seeing this image in the image thread:
Note: This is not Alpha canon, this is a more likely case scenario in what could eventually become kerokanon, if there is ever an S4 released. This is based on Vivio growing up far less angsty. |
Awwww~~~
Indeed, and not only that more likely to be in Rebuilt fanon as well.
Btw, we have to recognize that Alpha isn't Kerokanon IMO. Kerokanon is the main events inserted with OCs. Period. As such, strictly speaking, Kerokanon only exists within the scope of Season 1 to End of StrikerS. Anything else can come close, but has a chance of becoming AU, and should be considered such.
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Originally Posted by XenahortCharybdis
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Great work here! As usual, the spell list is too quantified for me to evaluate, but story wise it is an epic. Which era does he belong too? Sounds pretty old.
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NO! NOT ATHRUN ZALA VS KIRA! GET OUTTA MA HEAD!!!
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Pretty much sums up my reaction. Another deep chara here.
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Originally Posted by XenahortCharybdis
Sorry I had to do this doubleposting, but the forum board insisted that my post was too short.
I haven't made plans entirely for what and who this guy will be...so it's in limbo.
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- There are another 3 OCs coming up, but I lost an argument with my longtime girlfriend, a 4GB Thumbdrive, and now she's refusing to let me have my way with our accounts. Hope we patch up, but if it don't work out, I might have to get a new one, preferably a motorbike, because a bike doesn't argue, you don't buy her diamonds, and you don't have to meet her parents. That means I'll lose all my data I invested in her, although luckily my aging nanny, my manuscript book, has yet to die on me yet, so some things are still documented in there. I didn't lose my chapters of text, thankfully. It would have killed me to lose all 14k words of that...
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I like how you build on you spells a lot, there's quite some detail stuck inside, it's delicious.
And... dear god, poor boy.
Don't take it too hard, both about your work and your girlfriend. If it's bad, it's better to break up now than later.
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Originally Posted by Sheba
The following text is a summary and compilation written by an entity who gave himself
the "Archivist" name. Ancient Belka's historical archives being mostly fragments
of the bigger history, it was quite difficult to get the full picture of what was
Ancient Belka Empire, and its greatest accomplisshment.
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Same as Keroko, really really good work, just that it kinda flattens our current universe...
But I gotta admit, before I knew that Belka and Midchilda were the same place, I'd cook up something like this as well.
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Originally Posted by LoweGear
*sneaks in*
*drops package*
*RUNS*
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More background is always good.
Explains how she started out being so tsundere to him too.
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Originally Posted by LoweGear
Aren't those the same voices that do give you those good ideas?
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DO YOU HEAR THE VOICES TOO?!?! IT IS A GOOD PAIN
*RUNS*
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YOU MUST BE PURGED!!!
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Originally Posted by Comartemis
Fine, fine. Jesus, don't bite my freaking head off, Goose, it was just an idea.
Well it's a bit late to be abandoning this little sub-project now, so I'll post what I've got so far.
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*spits drink*
This must be the most well done incorporation of Spiralism into Nanohaverse to date! I was intending to use this "DNA power" as an explanation to the mystery of Inherent Skills, but looks like I didn't need to look very far. Too bad some of the story points conflict with my Belka world view, but for the principles of the school of Magic, I will have some use indeed!
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Originally Posted by Melodius Trueheart
I've been sort of talking about something called the "Lords", I think they need an explanation.
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Ah I see! A new subfaction based on Earth? They might be forcibly relocated off planet or not, but I guess not...
Unless they are underground.
Either way, I see the words SUBFACTION painted all over them, and I believe Skane has plans for these guys as well...
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Originally Posted by Melodius Trueheart
Speaking of Lords, here is the second Bishop of The Remnant Empire of Belka, Alejandro De Sevilla
Finally, a short note about the magic system they use
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Please excuse me while I go and scream ALEJANDRO CORNER!!!
Setsuna:
Granted it's not exactly the same person apart from the name.
However, being part of something big does link the two. Remnant Belka school of magic is very interesting indeed, and adding yet another school of thought into the Belka umbrella does give it much more factionalism as seen in terran Christianity from which I modelled some principles on. Really great! Just need to work on why the TSAB would allow such a huge magical organization to remain of Earth completely eludes me though...
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Originally Posted by Tempest Dynasty
Ahh I knew it was good to wait until the weekend. Much more active.
Alrighty folks. This here is the revised character.
If everyone approves, this will be also be the official working version. ...Until next revision, at least. I hope it's acceptable; I'll make some fancy dedicated post thing for linkage and reference later. |
I am most tempted to scream "HARUHI LIVES!!!" at the sudden reduction of power there. But the whisper of a Naaru to one of the Lost Sheep usually enough to do the trick.
Yes this looks better, though I'm still not quite certain of the heresy bits. Keroko has the rest of the answers, so until I see his versions I'd say my Rebuilt of Noland would be somewhere in the middle.
But one things for sure, Noland's doomed to becoming Vivio's meido. Already, the Rebuilt Nanoka series features 2Lt. Vivio having to tustle with her long time governor.
:3
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Originally Posted by Jimmy C
She did nothing. Even if she gave no orders, trusting in her officers, she should have done something to stay in the loop, monitor the situation, be ready to step in if she's needed. And with the large number of drones flying around, her wide-area attacks would have been very helpful in clearing them. Instead, she's holed up in the conference room "briefing" people. Something that Carim could have done.
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Politics man, politics. It sometimes is so bad you are forced to make a bad decision to make a future decision to keep things going.
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Originally Posted by Comartemis
Alright ladies and gents, here's the updated lineup of the Divine Phantasms. This is concurrent with my recent timelines, so barring any dramatic changes in my mood, this should be the final draft of the character lineup. Now for the characters themselves....
[SPOILER="The Divine Phantasms"]snip
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Don't need to say much, cos Keroko covered most of my points already.
Hmm... Ideas...
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Originally Posted by Keroko
Dwah? Noble famillies are ruling Belka now? Last I checked the church was pretty much in control of what remains of Belka.
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Agreed. The Church Council/Cardinal Circle is the ruling body of the Belka Self-Administrated Region and Aligned Territories, but it doesn't stop nobles from trying to squeeze themselves in "democratically" using their vast wealth, long accumulated clout and what-not at their disposable, much like what the Venetians did in their day. In fact, the sheer size of the warchests of a US President election is indication of how much wealth is actually needed to get elected democratically.
If they didn't make it, they almost certainly found room in the Saint Guard, which apart from reservists and regulars drawn from the locals, is a giant conglomerate of private militias. This measure was introduced by the TSAB to control the Nobles powers while keeping them happy. The Braummuhl family's Forty Thieves is one such detachment.
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Originally Posted by XenahortCharybdis
Not taking part in any of the current discussion mini-arcs right now, I said my pieces on the IRC, and then there's some more that I don't have the liberty to plow through right now.
So anyway, my long delayed...preview is here. It's split into 3 parts, and involves some OCs I haven't posted yet (it's still on paper manuscript) so it could get confusing.
First person view. Third person can wait for the real stuff.
First try writing a Nanoha fic, so...oh well, nevermind.
And...some sleep at last. AFTER this gets on the Fanfic thread. Oh well. |
Awesome work there, a great read nonetheless. I can figure out the timeline of this event to be sometime before StrikerS? And was that general Regius...?
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Originally Posted by Comartemis
Well great, now I need to screw with the history to get my coup working.
As for Lira, consider her dropped. I went for a nice little walk and thought of someone much better for the role of Steel Mage:
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I've nothing against the Sailors, but something else made me go >.> at the picture. I do hope I'm mistaken...
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Originally Posted by Kagerou
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Keikakudoori...
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Originally Posted by Tempest Dynasty
Ahh. Such endearing cries.
Khracky indeed.
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Keikakudoori...
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Originally Posted by AdmiralTigerclaw
[ACCESSING TSAB NAVAL ENGINEERING DATABASE...]
[ACCESS ATTAINED: OPENING TSAB NAVAL WEAPONS SYSTEMS FILES]
[COMPLETE]
[UPLOADING NEW TECHNOLOGY]
[UPLOAD COMPLETE... CLOSING DATABASE LINK]
[COVERING TRACKS]
[MISSION COMPLETE: TSAB Have 'Accquired' Sunstar Naval Weapons Technology ]
<_<
>_>
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Originally Posted by Keroko
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It's because... She's been there in her previous life, and ever since she merged with Saber and gained Excalibur, she can see more of her latent memories with clarity, which includes this.
:3
Though the next part made me go 0_0.
So...... Kha and Keroko are destined to work together to save the world? Darn KhaxKeroko should've been canon.
There's no paradox, just just another person out there who looks familiar, has something familiar, but is in actual fact a completely different person. After all, Kerokos aren't created by divine beings as observing interveners that safeguard their creations...
...is she?
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Originally Posted by Keroko
.........
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.........
*saves*
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Keikakudoori...
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Originally Posted by Wild Goose
Sadly appropriate. -_- *Me despairs*
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ZETSUBOSHITA! Abare Hunter ni ZETSUBOSHITA!!!
*RUNS*
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Originally Posted by Evangelion Xgouki
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Keikakudoori...
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Originally Posted by Keroko
Oh, you didn't know? There are Keroko's in just about any anime universe I like. The Keroko in Angelic Layer is a bright and cheerfull person who's had her share of wins and losses (her record is not as spotless as her canon compatriots) so she doesn't mind losing that much. Funny thing, due to her angels abillity to manupulate electricity, she can actually hold her ground her ground against Ohjiro fairly well.
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Kha over there, is the Chief Editor of the ARCHANGEL magazine, a Angelic Layer hobby magazine published by the Eriol Academy Journalism Club. He does the layer as well, and his angel Cleric is well known for his ability to create crosses of Light to use as his weapon. He calls that skill the Thousand Cross. However, he's just a side character writing a magazine that informs both meta-universe and across the 4th Wall about events in that timeline.
...>.>
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Originally Posted by Kyral
I'm suprised... first time I see a picture here that I have already on my hard drive for a long time. |
I'm not exactly an avid searcher, but when nuggets do show up I have to share them.
:3
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Originally Posted by LimitedEternal
O_O
*imagines that pic is indeed Tesla*
*imagines Tesla's reaction to this picture*
*nose explodes*
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Keikakudoori...
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Originally Posted by Satty
Uhh....hey again...looks like you guys broke the 12k barrier...
Anyway...fake OP time! I got bored and wanted to do something else other than a chapter....
Here it is:
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Great work Satty! Took a while, but yes the images do fit.
Hope you get back to working on season 2.
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Originally Posted by Aaron008R
Back on business...:3 =3 >3
The Divine Hammer of Inspiration strikes in most unexpected moments.
And it just struck me a while ago. Here's the result
I hope I got Keroko-chan right! ><
Anyways, this may or may not be part of GenerationS when it's nearing completion. But the chance is high.
And I got to try characterizing Grandis for the first time properly.
>:3
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Funny how the Aces always leave their men ingratiated to them!
Warm and fuzzy, and an eyeopener too; I learnt quite a bit on Grandis here.
The Cleric replays a video of an unsuspecting Governor of the Trolls being crushed by the mountain of backlog, then replaces it with this image:
Remember the Catgirls... For you do not fight The Cleric alone, but the legions I command.
*fizz*