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not gonna rate u by number, but here are my take on it:
upper body seems nice.. as for the lower... supposedly the base for a female body is a figure 8, in which the hip is wider than the shoulder. On yours, well, her tighs are beefed up (no problem with that), but the hip felt too narrow and this is further expressed by her left (our right) tigh. For her left leg, from the knee down needs some rounding.. a wider arch at the boot's lip will buy you that effect. and at such angle with that much paper, I don't think her left boot's sole should be visible..should be outside the focus box.
also, for better perspective effect, you might want to blur the line toward the viewer (easy pinky finger tip cheat)
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