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Old 2011-01-09, 21:31   Link #17160
Rei.K
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Bonzo, please allow me to provide a bit of criticism regarding your work, if it's ok.
I'm not such an active member, but I've been following your work by browsing these threads for a while. Since it looks like you're really into it, I think you deserve some feedback.

Kudos on imitating the original character design, you're doing a pretty good job on that. But I really think black and white scanned pencil work doesn't do justice to your efforts at all. As does the lack of any kind of coloring.
Really, your art would probably sky rocket if you tried to work on the outline more and color it.
Bodies and overall anatomy (hands for instance) could use a bit more work too, but that's usually how it goes at the beginning.

It seems you've been doing it for awhile, but I see no real improvement over time, as if you were purposefully limiting yourself.
You should think about taking it up to the next level, or you might end up stagnating.

Keep it up
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