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Old 2013-03-27, 21:14   Link #34
Vexx
Obey the Darkly Cute ...
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Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: On the whole, I'd rather be in Kyoto ...
Age: 61
This was amusing. I thought the comedy aspects were played well. Some awkward sentences and dialog but nothing a few more edit passes wouldn't fix.
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