Well.. If I may comment, the mid cloud's color looks weird.. bI found out that it usually happens when you put the top layer is on overlay blending mode. To put it bluntly as well, the font sux hard
especially for the
animesuki part
I love the hat in your first draft .. Your current version's hat seems like it was pasted on the pic. The clouds are also a weak point
But of course obviously, thats just IMHO >.>