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Who? Me? o_O
Naw, it's just a matter of learning to slowly improve my writing. Being able to recap a plot point within the narrative, in a natural and unobtrusive way, in order to gently remind your audience of things, is something a writer should be aware of. It's something I should have realized, especially after Future Tense. It's not enough to mention a plot point just once, but even to repeat it a few times in the fic itself.
And given that I am only a few chapters into G-Squad and Mirror, it shouldn't be too hard to scan them and insert a brief paragraph or two.
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