Yeah Poncho doesn't look anywhere near fat / disgusting enough. He looks overweight but only that. The wolf girl maybe looks a bit too old too? Wasn't she only like 10?
Hakuya and Aisha look fine. Juna is alright but she could have a more mature expression on her face.
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