[Kha]

Originally Posted by USB500

First of all, thanks for creating this thread, Skyfall! You shall have cookies from me very soon. =3



May I add?

• Try to have the character as realistic as possible in term of ability and magic usage (example: she might get easily tired after casting a powerful area-affect spell).
• If possible, try not posting too many characters in one post. I bet some of us will already have ideas, but please let anyone else discuss.

So, Kha, your character appears 10 years after StrikerS? I really like the setting and her background (miko? That's fairly new to me, at least in Nanoha Universe). Oh, yeah, I manage to notice the reference to Tsubasa Chronicles .

Interesting. I'd like to see how far she can go.

p/s: would like to post the aces of Belkan Knighthood (A's Combat) but not sure if it can be done @__@

Well someone's done it so its okay.

A bit more on Background:

This Nanoka is a loli spinoff of an older char who appears in another fic of mine, Mobile Angel Reiya, which is set in another universe, but the same multiverse. I've always wanted to do a backstory on her, and this thread gave me the idea to get started.

For Nanoka's father's tribe, (he's still unnamed, I need a name for him) I was thinking about a traditional Japanese society existing in MC, like the German Velka group that arose on the planet. They are human, but due to some morphological differences, like pointed ears, they call themselves Eta, meaning "descendents of gods" in their tongue, and hence have a low opinion of other races. Human-Eta relationships are frowned upon. And worst off are the Half-Eta children like Nanoka; to them Half-Eta seem like defiled atrocities. Ironically, the Moriyama twins have an incredibly rare Eta trait, the "lopped ear", meaning they have their ears all furry and sticking straight out the sides of their heads. Culturally, that means that they share the ears of the Starseer Teana who supposedly brought the Eta to Mid-childa eons ago. That trait is also considered sexy in Eta tastes, so you can imagine the irony when both of them drop by the village for the first time.

Nanoka knows transformation magic to turn her ears to those of a human, and so her lopped ears only appear when she unseals Pluma Holi.

Originally Posted by Erio

Kha!! I was about to post my character! Good thing I decided to refresh the page before posting.

Your character seems like Nanoha and Yuuno's daughter (or even Erio and Caro's ). lol And the fact that she's Suzuka's daughter caught me completely off guard.

Wings of Pain seems kind of out of character for Nanoka. I dont think she's the type who would make other people suffer.

Nanoha Scrya, huh? Knowing you, you just HAD to include that. lol

Nice character overall. Definitely a Priest-type, with a... dangerous hidden spell.

Yeah well if you look at all my Nanoha Files fics, the intro is often done by one "Lt. Comm. Nanoha Scrya".

Wind of Pain does feel weird. Maybe Wind of Confusion, such that it is a bind?

Originally Posted by Timeless Enigma

I suppose this would be a cross post, maybe I should remove the other one in the fanfiction thread. I was intent on being the first to share a character, however I was stuck when arriving upon the "Alignment" value. I had to force myself to remember the RPGs I had played and look up their descriptions. Anyway in the end I decided to toss it out the window.

A small note, I intend to place this character in a potential work called "The Bureau (working title)"

Spoiler for Setsuya Amemiya, the Soul Assassin:

General Information
Name: Setsuya Amemiya
Nickname: Soul Assassin
Age: 21 (August 7th)
Sex: Male
Origin: Kyoto, Japan, Earth
Affiliation: Time-Space Administration Bureau / Executive Branch / Midchilda Surface Headquarters / 9th Investigative Unit "INVIX" (pronounced “Inviz”)
Position: Investigations Officer, 2nd Grade
Rank (Equivalent): 2nd Lieutenant (TSAB Armed Forces)
Mage Rank: A-
Magic System: Belka / Midchilda
Magic Colour: Dark Blue
Magic Predisposition: Ice
Specialty: Countering Anti-Magic Fields
Devices: Aquilo (Intelligent Armed Device) and Sirocco (Intelligent Armed Boost Device)


Physical Attributes
Height: 180 cm
Weight: 71 kg
Build: Medium
Eye Colour: Slate Grey
Hair Colour: Midnight Blue
Hairstyle: Ear length, straight but unkempt
Facial Features: Clean-shaven

Alignment: (Too restrictive)
Personality: Has a hardworking personality and a sense of humour. While he is thought of as a “nice guy,” everyone has their demons. While a certain event in the past fostered good traits such as diligence and empathy, it has also brewed a melancholy cocktail. Amemiya feels he has the right to exact “justice” on those whole stole his future, thus he siphons souls.


Current Situation
Setsuya Amemiya is a mid-level member of TSAB's 9th Investigative Unit dubbed INVIX (Taken from the roman numeral of 9 and the INV of Investigative) which is given assignments by the executive branch. 9th Investigative Unit is not affiliated with the military branch of TSAB, however many of their assignments see INVIX cooperate with the likes of investigators from the TSAB Armed Forces.

He is notable in that he has mage ranking of A- while being a commissioned officer. This low rating causes him to be overlooked and underestimated and has made it difficult to move up in ranks. He compensates with his physicality, using more physical force than relying magic spells. Longer arias and casting times are usually required because of his low magic output.

Amemiya’s magical system is an unusual hybrid of Midchilda and Belka. Most Belkan practitioners make use of Armed Devices with cartridges; however Amemiya’s Sirocco is a limited boost device as well as an armed device and saps magic energy from the surroundings to increase his own output.

Advantages: Has the potential to be an excellent hybrid combatant using fast and devastating physical attacks coupled with good ranged options and defensive abilities. Excels in melee and can be an asset in overcoming anti-magic field environments and other situations where alternative methods must be used.
Disadvantages: While he has the ability to fly, doing so is straining. He is not very well geared for a support role as his spells do not have a fast execution time. Amemiya will usually be dependent on a fullback who can cast support spells as well as boost ups at a high rate.


History Summary
Amemiya was a victim of the final Book of Darkness incident 10 years ago. His linker core was absorbed and suffered long-term damage. This is the main reason for his inability to break S rank and why it has taken him a longer time to move up the ladder. Twice a month, he sees a physician in hopes of restoring his linker core back to its original state. Several years ago he learned of the mistress of the Book of Darkness and harbours some ill will towards Lieutenant Colonel Hayate Yagami and her circle of friends.


Arms and Magic
Devices
Aquilo the Neutralizer
Style: Intelligent Armed Device (Sword)
Attribute: Ice
A wave-bladed sword primarily wielded with both hands. Aquilo includes parrying hooks near the hilt, a sharp point for thrusting and a hook on one edge for trapping other weapons.

Modes
Shock mode (Default): Used for standard sword fighting and excels in parrying other physical attacks and trapping weapons.
Sting mode: Mid-range energy shooting mode.


Sirocco the Soul Siphon
Style: Intelligent Armed Boost Device (Sword/Staff)
Attribute: Absorption
A curved backsword much like a sabre and wielded with one hand. This is preferred for swifter attacks and increased mobility. Sirocco makes use of general boosting to increase the user’s magic output by collecting and actively leeching magic energy collected from the immediate surroundings. Magic output can be greatly increased over a short period of time much like a Belka cartridge (spike boost) or marginally a longer period of time (level boost).

Forms
Passive form (Default): When Sirocco is sheathed it looks like a mage’s staff. Used much like a staff and allows for more summoning abilities rather than physical attacks.

Active form: used much like a physical sword. Open wounds allow for more magic power to be collected.

I like the character Kha, and the wrinkles you've put in place. Unfortunately while I enjoy mahou shoujo I don't make myself watch/read much of it so many of the references went right over my head. I can't really offer much in the way of advice right now, sorry.

No prob man. A nice and dark character you got. The interactions with Riot 6 is definitely going to be problematic. And I see a fic of him being assigned to work on the same case as the Riot 6 due to his AAMF specialty, and literally sparks flying all over. There's potential to make a powerful story out of that for sure!

Originally Posted by Kikaifan

I like most of it but... that height is crazy. That'd be tall at twice that age.

Huh? ARGH!!! I shrunk her, but forgot her body specs!!! Oh no!

Originally Posted by Serenity85

wow impressive work^^ I love it. Much thought went into I see. LOve the idea of the timid uber type, afraid of her own power. I'm so gonna come up with a character of my own when I can come up with something that fits my idea^^ lol Team Mentor: Nanoha Scrya huh^^ better be careful or you'll start the war again^^

alright *heads of to put together character bio*

Originally Posted by USB500

I think Nanoka is very well-developed for her age

Okay, time for mine.

Spoiler for length:

ANNABELLE MUSTANG
Age: 11 in Magical Lyrical Nanoha StrikerS
Birthday: 14th June
Hair colour: silver
Eye colour: brown
Height: 150cm
Weight: 40kg
Affiliation: Time-Space Administration Bureau
Position / Rank in TSAB: Commissioned Officer
Home World: Earth
Device: Miata & Vios
Device Appearance: bracelets
Magic System: Mid-Childa
Magic Element: earth
Partner: Leonidas (beast form: lion)
Magic colour: brown
Personality: Annabelle is a cheerful and happy-go-lucky girl who seems to be insensible of harsh situation around her. Very immature and childish, her naiveté is so troublesome her partner Leonidas is often forced to act as her paternal guard, protecting her from all form of dangers whether she realizes it or not. A peace lover and songstress by nature, she is very easy-going and doesn’t mind being scolded by her superiors.

HISTORY
Annabelle is the granddaughter of General Armstrong, former commander of the TSAB Armed Force and leader of the bureau’s 271st Special Force Unit, The Wind Talkers. She was first discovered to be aptitude with magic when she was only 3 years old: Annabelle cast an earth-based shield that prevented her family’s villa from buried under soil when a landslide struck her village. Despite the newfound power she was unable to protect her village from the landslide that also claimed her parents’ live and was left as the only survivor. After the disaster, she was adopted by her grandfather who was also the master of Leonidas who would play the role as Annabelle’s partner for the next eight years.

Currently she is assigned under Yuuno Scrya.

POWER
Annabelle is a Support-type class. Almost all her magic spells are used for support purpose, whether offensive or defensive. She is proficient with speed-casting and often uses this talent for the benefit of her team. Her mage rank is A.

Miata and Vios, given by Annabelle’s grandfather as her birthday present, are categorized as Storage Device. They are constructed to resemble bracelets (Miata is the left bracelet, while Vios is the right bracelet). Each has specific role: Miata’s function is to regulate Annabelle’s magic while Vios act as spell guidance system.

DEFENSIVE ABILITIES

• Barrier Jacket: Annabelle’s suit is a Cleric-type uniform, with brown/white trim colour scheme. This suit is not just the flashy costume, but also refers to an invisible defensive field generated by the costume, reducing or eliminating any serious injury from events such as an impact with a building.
• Bastion: Annabelle’s first spell, it is used for defensive purpose whether to protect its caster or target of choice (usually friendly units).
• Round Table: a powerful shield able to absorb physical or magical attacks. It can only protect from one direction, however.
• Bind Break: Annabelle tempts to deactivate a binding or imprisoning spell. The amount of time required to deactivate depends on the complexity of the target magic.
• Megalith: the most powerful Shield-type magic, it creates a wall of stones that either surrounds target or stands between target and oncoming threat.

OFFENSIVE ABILITIES

• Earthquake: Annabelle’s regular offensive spell, she summons an earthquake that delivers moderate to extreme damage to target area (its damage rating is, interestingly, measured on Richter scale). While powerful it is useless against airborne targets.
• Stalagmite: functions the same as Earthquake but Annabelle summons spikes from Earth instead of tremor. Very useful to separate huge group into small skirmishes. On some occasion, the stalagmites can also be used as barricades.
• Liquefaction: it transforms granular material from solid to liquid, and may cause structures or people to tilt or sink into the liquefied deposits.
• Meteor: Annabelle summons meteors from up above and sends them crashing onto target area. It can hit both grounded and airborne targets but is less effective against targets with high mobility rate.
• Fissure: it is actually a Richter-9 Earthquake but in reality is a very different form of magic. It is rarely used due to long casting time (even speed spell-casters like Annabelle needs ample time to cast such spell). When unleashed, its destructive power is more than enough to level an area the size of Hong Kong. Its other name is Death Valley.

ADDITIONAL INFORMATION
Like anyone assigned under senior officers, Annabelle admires Yuuno and often calls him ‘big brother’. This puts her on odds against Leonidas (who believes that Yuuno is using her naiveté for his own advantage) and Arf (who thinks Annabelle is too young to have a boyfriend). When not on duty or training, Annabelle often practices singing as her ambition is to become a songstress.

Note the reference to Mustang, Miata and Vios cars.

It was done in under 1 hour. Believe me, my head feels aching while writing down her biography . Feedbacks?

It's in fashion to boost huh? Even the Kha mentioned in my post is also one, albeit he's so broken cos he's good at shielding, boosting, tanking with shield off while only suffering from lack of options in the damage department (One melee an 1 ranged attack, unless you count his shield tricks.)

Yes I forgot about that. *EDITS*

No not bad. BTW I saw Mustang, then I saw Gen. Armstrong, then I went, "are you sure it's just cars?" lol