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Old 2009-03-10, 21:26   Link #210
LKK
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Join Date: Nov 2006
Location: Virginia, USA
Age: 62
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Originally Posted by Evil Rick View Post
Come on people! I always give C&C to all the entries
Fair enough. Not to mention that I owe you for all your help.

On the first picture, that red in the bottom right doesn't seem to belong to the picture. It's drawing my attention without contributing anything to the picture. I like the fox tail girl. But there isn't enough definition between top of her head and the background. I don't think her hair is supposed to reach out of frame, but I can't tell where her hair ends and the background begins. If it's an intentional blend of the two, it's not obviously enough intentional. (She's a cutie, by the way.)

On the second picture, the flames and the main character seem like their from two different pictures rather than belonging to one picture. The difference between the hyper-real flames and the character style is too obvious for my tastes. Maybe tone down the flames??
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