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Originally Posted by USB500
Apply this to all the potential candidates in this OC thread, and what do we have?
*beams at Takeru*
Oh, wait. Takeru is immune to those five factors.
Must.... write.... story... NAO!
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Wait what?
Oh, right... Takeru's manliness can handle such an onslaught
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Originally Posted by USB500
You forgot bouncy humanoid Silberkugel
*runs from Avenger Silberkugel*
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SUPREME ORG-
*radio static*
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Originally Posted by Kha
Artei: Wrecked, Boss! Absolutely wrecked! (Now why can't it have been me. )
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Yes Art, we know how you feel
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Originally Posted by KBTKaiser
Here we go!
*hears collisions of multiple sonic booms*
Spoiler for Atarana Bakusou! Part F:
Despite being nodachis, the original forms of Magnum and Sonic were found to be extremely versatile in addition to powerful, as the taichou-tachi found out within the first clash. The brothers met each other head on with Magic-boosted speed steps, blades clashing and sending out a shockwave before they split up again. As Goukon seemed to channel energy onto the blade briefly, Retsugou also seemed to the same as both unleashed a bolt of energy, which clashed briefly before dissapating with another shockwave.
G: Denkousekka ga tsujinai ka... (So Denkousekka doesn't work...)
R: Atarimaeda, Gou. Omae no aite wa omae to nagai tsukishita no aniki dakara na. (Of course, Gou. That's because your opponent is your brother, who's been with you for a long time.)
G: Naraba, kochi wa ikki ni ikuzo! (Then, let's go all out!)
R: Omae ga iwarenakutemo sou surunda! (Even if you didn't say so, I'm going the same!)
Suddenly, the brothers seemed to vanish and only the sounds of blades clashing were heard.
Nanoha: Eh? Doko ni kiecchata no? (Eh? Where'd they disappear to?)
Subaru: Nanoha-san, Kettouba no shoumei wo kurozumimasen ka? (Nanoha-san, can we darken the dueling grounds?)
Nanoha: Ah, nantoka shimasu.(Yeah, I can do something about it)
Fate: Sore wo suru de doshimasuka? (What do you intend on doing with that?)
Ginga: Ano futari no sokudou de wa miemasen deshou? Mierumono wa ano futari no nodachi dake desu. (You can't see those two due to their speed, yes? The only thing you can see is their nodachis.)
Signum: Naruhodo. Senba wo kurozumimasu no hou de nodachi no yaiba ga hikari wo terikaesu. (I see. Darken the battlefield to see light reflecting off the blades of the nodachis.)
Suddenly, the slashing sounds stopped as Retsugou and Goukon were in the same pose, blade flats parallel to the ground. Subaru felt a chill run up her back as she collapsed to the ground.
Subaru: D-deta! Kore kanari mazui da! (It's here! This is really bad!)
Ginga: Sou ne...heta wo yatteru nara ippou wa shinderu desu...(That's true...if something messes up one of them's gonna die...)
Nanoha: Nande sonna ni mazui desu? (Why is it so bad?)
Teana: Kono kengi wa isshun de shoubu wo derun desu...Ougi...(This sword attack will finish a battle in a single moment...Ougi...)
R/G: KOUJINSEN!
S/M: LIGHT BLADE FLASH!
A single blade clash and the brothers had their backs to each other, blades out in a sweeping motion.
Retsugou: Mata hikiwake...(Another tie...)
Goukon: Tsugi ni ikou ka? (Shall we move on to the next?)
Retsugou: Mada yamenai ka? Shoganai...SONIC! (You're not stopping? I guess it can't be helped...SONIC)
Goukon: MAGNUM!
R/G: Nishiki Hatsudou!
The battlefield seemed to bright back to normal for moment as the Nodachi had vanished from the brothers hands. The two brought up their arms into a fightning position, what little light was bypassing the filters glinting off their gauntlets.
Another post, more references, and more possibilities...
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Did the brothers just rip off Vysaga?!
You even put in an excuse to have the environment darken SRW style
Shouldn't
Lamia Signum be objecting to the rip-off right now?
And...
[Aaron008R]I envy your proficiency in translating your works into Japanese...
[/Aaron008R]
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Originally Posted by Aaron008R
Whew...
It's a good thing I held back on the more suggestive words like Innocent, Seductive, Pure and Willing, Yearning and the like... Otherwise, there might have been quite a bloodbath...
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Yep...
C2F Khorne would've been proud