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Originally Posted by OceanBlue
Wow, I liked it. Nice job. I hope to see more of it. ^__^
Other than that [I had some issues with comma placements or lack of, but no one really cares.], I didn't have a problem with it.
You didn't explain what the fanfiction was about in the post, athough it was pretty obvious once you started reading it.
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Yeah, I have a nack for either using long comma filled sentances or short sentances that should have commas, but don't. It's more my style of writing, a stream of conscienciousness thing. I get trouble for it all the time in Lit Class.
And yes, I didn't add a description, I should do that now. I guess I just forgot about it. Thanks for your comments OceanBlue, and thank you for reading.
Chapter 3 is in the final editing stage, and I've written Chapter 4 already, I just need to go over it a few times before it's ready. I should have an update tomorrow after school.
