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Originally Posted by Yu Ominae
Dammit! That's one way!!!
Now I don't know how to look at it for a dark, grim atmosphere!  
To be honest, I'm not sure on whether I should do that or something else... |
Dark, grim atmosphere is plenty easy in a family tragedy fic, considering the series handed it to you on a silver platter.
But if you want a change, why not reverse it? Saji dies due to Celestial Being, and Kinue is the one left grieving? It could be back at the League Tower, or because of the terrorist attacks, or you could spin your own reason. Did Setsuna get exposed, and Saji become a bystander? Perhaps instead of attacking a wedding in Spain, Neena Trinity attacks a small school gathering in the Japanese country side, where one boy is admitting his intended proposal?
You can do it, it still stay perfectly platonic.