Argh, I almost posted this in the EP7 forum, without realizing that it's not confirmed who the authors were until EP8. 8)
Anyways, I'm going back through EP1 just for the fun of it because of a certain reason.. *cough* and it's interesting if you go back and try to imagine what Yasu (or Battler/Tooya in EP3-4) was thinking when they were writing. For example:
"I guess I have all that muscle training and those shady mail-order performance-enhancing drugs to thank for that."
This line seems so out of place that I can't help but think Yasu got carried away with imagining Battler's 6-yr-older hot sexy body at that point. I wouldn't be surprised if there was a drool spot on that page.