I haven't proceeded on my story nor on the drawing... I tried to improve them instead.
Tonight I came up with this:
I like this one more than first one. Kyuubi looks more threatening and Naruto on the other side ... well ... dunno ... It's prettier that way.
I think I'm gonna try doing page one like that. There'll be less on the page, but if I manage to get it right, it will be a lot nicer that previous version.
I feel like hi-jacking a thread to say this >_<
Gomen...