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The Mage of Four Hearts
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Flere821
Of Science and Magics Ch14 by
Stormwolfex
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http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6873009/14
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Index arc ending
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Anyone else apart from me thought Mikoto being the one hit by memory loss instead of Touma felt like it wasn't done well?
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I'll agree that it could have been done better. I see what he was going for, but it is forced, a feather getting her and just her memories of Touma getting erased. Also, what gave Stormwolfex the idea that Mikoto's electromagnetic shielding should have an effect on that spell? If he was going to do that, he should have just had all her memories erased. Also, why on Earth would he nerf her powers as well? Seems too much like what happened with Accelerator. It's the same sort of thing with the whole Darker and Edgier Touma thing, it just feels unnecessary. Despite that it was a good chapter. I especially liked the part with Index, Stiyl and Kaori. They should have done that in canon, though I understand why they didn't.
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