[Kirito]

Glad to see you again with some summaries Triple R. I read them and they're great as always.

For the Canon route I'm amazed you've focused more on Sayaka's change in personality during the three choice selections given. In the first one she was apologetic, the second spiteful, and the final one understanding. I liked out each outcome sort of gave Madoka a realization of Sayaka's new life and change in personality like in the anime continuity itself. It makes sense because magical girls fighting each other and watching one's friend changing into someone different to the point where it's horrifying, is too much to take for Madoka, who's emotionally fragile. The scenarios were amazing, great work "claps"!

Spoiler for True Canon Couple Thoughts:

As for the true canon route the Sayaka and Kyoko romance is definitely the way to go considering that there encounter with each other was like "love at first fight" kind of scenario. This is quite logical because they're both tomboyish and have competitive personalities. Kyoko's methods of witch handling are more harsh and risky while Sayaka tends to be safe and rational. Well as they say: when two people fight, they really care about each other !!

Homura getting the romance with Madoka really was touching because she succeeded in changing her fate and getting her love in the end. To be honest I was happy for Homura and at the same time crushed considering that if Mami didn't die I'm sure that she and Madoka would've been together canon wise. Mami's death in the anime really hurts and pisses me off to this day, and makes me depressed when forums or people reference it.

Sorry for whining, back on topic. Great work on showing us how the canon couples melded together nicely and how you were able to keep the flow of the story going natural and logical at the same time. Hats off to you, excellent work as always.

The Alliance Chain was really creative and funny. I spent the whole few minutes reading it, laughing. I don't know if it's intentional but I got a good laugh and eyebrow raising moments coming from me. Phenomenal job on this chain, you rock as always.

Grading time:

Spoiler for Score:

9/10 for the scenarios, endings, following the anime logic splendidly, and the I'm not so sure but hilarious chain. The negative thing was the Mami not being there, it'll still continue to hurt and piss me off. Sorry if I sound pathetic.

Spoiler for Advice:

For the next upcoming scenarios, try telling the summaries from the other girls perspective from time to time. I read many first person light novels and they do this from time to time. For example for Madoka x Mami or Sayaka (I'm sure Kyoko and Homura) scenarios, give them a part of the story and share their thoughts and feelings regarding Magical Girls, each other, and the scenery etc.

The last summaries of yours got me thinking. You know, Mami meeting the family, and Sayaka's old flame getting out of the hospital. Give them you know a window of opportunity and share there thoughts and how they feel from their own reason and logic. Keep the usual Madoka perspective (since she's the main focus of the series, I love Madoka as a character), and add theirs just to add more "spice" to the summaries.

I know it's your story but I'm just trying to help you jot some creativity for future summaries...that's all. Forgive and ignore me if you don't like my idea or if I'm being too demanding or picky.

Can't wait for the Mami x Madoka beach trip!! Keep up the phenomenal job as always, I'll be waiting.