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Originally Posted by Sageblink
Well, even though I kinda enjoyed it, I wouldn't called "solid" a story where the main girl just follows some random girl she barely knows because she "saw" something, instead of going to a teacher/superior to talk about it.
It is indeed cliché, but usually the characters are forced to tag along in some way. Yet she decided on her own to follow. 
Sure, she may have thought "maybe there are more of them" but that doesn't seem to be imply at all. She just rescue her and run away for the sake of the plot. Now let's just wait for the other 4 of them to come together as a group but I'm not quite sure a plot twist would elevate the plot... |
Who was she going to talk to? There was no one else in authority
at the tournament other than members of the Origami family, one of whom she had
seen was a monster, and another of whom had just tried to kill Hiyori. The choice was get out or be murdered. Reveal what you know and
definitely be murdered, along with anyone who may have been close enough to hear what you said. Flee until you have a chance to try to find out who can and can't be trusted.