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Old 2011-10-04, 23:36   Link #2216
Eratas123
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@Blitz- Thank You! This should help a lot in the scene rewriting later.

@Meister- I'll mention Karons home being changed into a space ladder or something later in the story.

Is Karon perverted or have any boys love fangirl tendencies at all? If she is then I can add some humor between her and Irish since he's sexually clueless and when he crosdresses he looks like this (just change the eye color from red to yellow):

http://danbooru.donmai.us/post/show/...swap-gun-hair_

http://danbooru.donmai.us/post/show/...enderswap-hair

http://danbooru.donmai.us/post/show/...oker-convenien

I'll probably have Karon and Irish act like some kind snarky brother sister pair throughout the story, his planned romance is with someone else. Is it okay for them to act like this?

How did Karon come to meet Ichika and get attached to him? I can include this later.

Is she friends with everyone in her class? Does she have any enemies?

I plan to change the ISper concept so that she's naturally empathic even outside the suit and borderline psychic when she's in one.

Karon works for a T.V show right? Do they know her civilian status or is it kept a secret?

How adept is she in live combat? Is she willing to kill people to get the job done or never kills anyone at all?

Does she have any combat capabilities outside of the chassis? If she does then where did she learn them?

Other than terrorists are there other things that really bother her or irk her?

Last edited by Eratas123; 2011-10-05 at 02:11.
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