this is another picture in which I played with perspective/dimension.
http://img19.exs.cx/img19/3011/WARDEN-upload.jpg
the size gradient and pose looked very natural in the draft, but after applying fine lines, it got quite different.
again I'd like you to rate it in terms of how I handled the angle and the proportions.
what I'd also want to draw your attention to is the lower body, feel free to comment/tip on anything you think is wrong/needs improving with it.