I didn't even saw chapter 24 O_o
Wow this is by far the better of the three, awesome artistic skills (seriously, this focus on jeremiah, and some of Kallen's expression were really <3333) and really strong moments; Your way to do the end reminds me what some of us were expecting when we didn't knew the end, especially the Jeremiah/Nunnally confrontation.
And this moment where Nunally is putting kallen's hand in his...really cute (just like this shot where Suzaku is bearing her...really really good)
What's up with this topless Kallen though ? Wouldn't it have been better with bands on her chest ?
Hurry up for the next chapter ! Seriously, I even saved your chapters on my laptop, I want the end :P
I'll be glad to help but Italian isn't my first language...and even in english I'm not really skilled -_-
But it's clearly necessary, it's a pity that such a few people can understand it.