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Old 2008-01-22, 11:11   Link #1182
Tyabann
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Join Date: Nov 2007
Location: Canada
Age: 29
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Originally Posted by Jintor View Post
Doublepost, but I feel kinda justified. I've finished editing Chapters 1 and 2 of the Melancholy of Suzumiya Haruhi. Comments and criticism, please.

http://lumbargo.googlepages.com/them...suzumiyaharuhi

and

http://lumbargo.googlepages.com/chapter2

I also edited the Baka-Tsuki pages, on the basis that it's a wiki. If you hate it, just revert it, it's that simple. >__<

Kyon's mode of dialogue is really fun to write, but he's also extremely wordy. Keeping up with all the references is annoying, and this is really sucking up a lot of time. But it's time I can spare.
As long as you don't change the standardized names of anything or remove the "-san" after "Asahina-san" (MY hard work) I don't care.

That "1999" thing still bothers me, but so does ANY translation of that line.

Also, learn to use a spellchecker if you're going to edit the rest of the novel.

Last edited by Tyabann; 2008-01-22 at 11:20. Reason: Eh.
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