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Old 2011-12-03, 01:34   Link #980
Join Date: Oct 2010

Well it should have been handled in a more mature manner. But a person really doesn't need to do so along those lines. Why don't you take a crack at it Runty? Focus on building the romantic side of Cosette and Avan's relationship, with the Girl getting her man. Flashback to earlier times could aid you in maturation of the entire story over what might account to just a few short days at the tail end of the year, when she gets his commitment to her.
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