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Old 2013-04-07, 11:57   Link #41288
demino_hellsin
That one guy
 
 
Join Date: Nov 2011
I was in a mountainous region once. I regret not jumping *sigh*

Dating my cousin huh? Can't imagine. All the women of my family have something about them that give me the willies. It's not even the trained instinct of knowing they are family. There's really at least one trait about each of them that genuinely scares me haha.

What I hate about third person writing is how difficult it is to get into a character's head without giving away too much and making the flow unnatural or boring exposition.

EDIT: I once asked a friend about their relationship, he gave me the stinkeye. I asked another. He broke down crying. The third I asked just shrugged and said it's kinda like work. Another was happy to "be free at last" or something though I think he's not over it. But I digress.
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