2008-09-20, 18:44
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Originally Posted by Knight of L-sama
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Backwards Non-TBC breaker!
Spoiler for Coffee Shop Revisited (pt 2):
“W-What is it?”
Nanoha leaned in close and then stopped, suddenly suspicious. She whirled around, her eyes darting around at every bush, every alley that could be hiding stalkers. No, this would not do at all.
“Come on, let’s go.” Nanoha snatched Fate’s hand and started running, disregarding that Fate was clumsily trying to keep hold of everything they had just bought.
“N-Nanoha! Hold on! Where are we-“
Nanoha didn’t stop running. Couldn’t stop running. Not until she was sure their privacy was secured. She had to go somewhere no one else would go. She had to find somewhere…
“There!” Nanoha declared triumphantly as she stopped at her apartment. She had just finished furnishing it too; this was a good opportunity.
“Mou, don’t…” Fate was still catching her breath as Nanoha unlocked the door. “Don’t… run so… much. I’m not as… fast as you… When you’re hyped on coffee.”
“Nyahaha… just come in, come in, make yourself comfortable.”
“Don’t mind if I do.” Fate sighed as she placed their now cold breakfast on the counter on her way to flopping down on Nanoha’s bed. “God, you tire me out…”
Nanoha giggled as she sat down at the foot of the bed and watched Fate catch her breath.
Fate eventually looked up and saw her looking without saying anything. “What? Why are you smiling?”
Nanoha could feel her breath hitch and then quicken and then slow and quicken again. This was it. No big fat guys or skinny librarians or privacy concerns or anything to get in the way now… “Fate...”
Fate slowly sat up, as if sensing that Nanoha was about to drop some big news. “Oh my god, Nanoha, are you pregnant?”
“What?! No!” The shock and surprise hit her system in such a way that her anxiety was swept away in a single blow. She blurted out, “I wanted to tell you I’m in love with you!”
Only then did it occur to Nanoha that that was not how she had wanted to confess. But the bullet had been bitten, and now it was in Fate’s hands.
“Nanoha… Na…noha…” Fate opened and closed her mouth several times, trying to decide how to respond. “I don’t know what to say…”
“How about ‘I love you, too’? That’s always a good one.” Nanoha’s invisible tail wagged hopefully.
“Ah…” Fate flushed and looked away. “That’s… I mean… it’s not that I don’t… I mean… Nanoha is… Nanoha is very… very…”
“Loveable?” It came out almost as a whimper, the hope dying.
“Ah… Loveable yes…” Nanoha perked up excitedly, before Fate continued, “But… no… well… that is… Actually, I’ve been thinking about you… about us a lot recently…”
“You have?” Nanoha was getting impatient, but it sounded favorable so far, so she wasn’t about to ruin that.
“Yes… that is to say… Nanoha…” Fate took hold of Nanoha’s hands and looked up into her eyes, struggling to get the words out. “I think… no… Nanoha, I’ve always loved you like a best friend and I don’t want to ever lose that.”
Nanoha faltered, her voice shaky as she responded, “Y-you won’t… never. I promise.”
Fate smiled then and finished, “Then, since you already did, maybe it’s okay to admit… Nanoha… I am… I have been… in love with you too. For a really long time.”
Nanoha’s chapped lips cracked and bled from the breadth of her smile. Sucking on her own blood, she closed the distance between them and…
They shared a hug.
Actually, rather than really continuing, it's more like providing the other half of a one-shot ^.^;; |
Nice way to end this story, I lol'd at how Nanoha confessed, and the hug was unexpected xD
Thanks a lot for deciding finishing this fic, Knight of L-sama-sama ^^
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Originally Posted by Vivio Testarossa
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Let me guess... we just missed our chance to get a C?
;_;
Cuídense y sigan sonriendo 
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