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Old 2008-09-02, 00:51   Link #23
Langus
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Join Date: Feb 2008
Location: Japan/Canada
Age: 34
Thank you so much. The critiques are much appreciated I'm a stickler for fixing typos so I'll have to go back and nab that one tonight. If you notice any others please let me know. I'm a Hemingway lover as well but I've been trying to stray from the extra long sentences as of late. I'll have to go back over those old chapters and see if I can't fix them up a bit. Thanks again for taking the time to read it *thumbs way up*

P.S: Matsumoto and Gin are most definitely pure win
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