I like the sprinkling of comedy you threw in.
I see a few grammatical errors, but I find this prologue to be much more interesting than the last.
I found the part of the previous prologue with the little girl to be confusing. I didn't understand the part where it described her tears as "made of water and blood combined." Was she injured, or was that just description?
Just to make sure, I have to ask. This is the all the same story, right? Also, about how often do you write?