@lordshadowisle, that was a funny story, I got a good laugh near the end, and also got some sympathy for the devil. Unless I understood this one wrong as well, the protagonist (excluding the devil as protagonist of course) is one of those dim wit male leads in a harem show, yes? My initial complaint about it was "blind fanservice? eww, that's worse then normal one" but given you've made use of it as a plot device I have no problem with it.
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