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Old 2011-07-14, 18:11   Link #695
Sheba
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Join Date: Jun 2006
Location: Formerly Iwakawa base and Chaldea. Now Teyvat, the Astral Express & the Outpost
Age: 44
My first short story since 2008-2009

I really need exercize, I started it since the 13th in the morning, I intended to finish it before the end of the Bastille Day in France, but I did not, being distracted from my task by family and house chores. Sorry

But it is not over in the world so I shall link it to you.

It's mainly OC

Happy Bastille Day

Author's Note:

It was a challenge to myself, and I can't say it was a success as far as time management go. My need to go in small details and give my characters lines that would characterize them correctly left me unsatisfied. But I hope I have given people a rough insight of my OCs' respective personalities. I still have another short in progress. And I am sorry to not have finished this Bastille Day short earlier, otherwise I would have beta-ed it by people with better grasp on English.

Take it as a side story, where characters in the background have their adventures too. As I finished it, I could notice that it was mainly Sanae's and Fio's, especially in the beginning.

Featured OCs were:


Kirsten Vikernes (Assault)

Preston Lee Whitworth(Medica)

Amelie D'Artagnan (Inquesta)

Fiorenza Diotallevi (Logi)

Sanae Noriaki (Amdo)

Jin Yamazaki (SSR)

Svetlana Dragovic (Snipe)

Naoko Kazami (Connect)

Erin Dee Kirishima (Informa)

Yves Brunet (Assault)

Kaede Fujita (Inquesta)

Yasmin Saif (Lezzad)

belonging to kct were:

Tomomi Imamura (Snipe)

Yukio Yamakawa (Logi)

Last edited by Sheba; 2011-07-15 at 06:13.
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