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Old 2013-01-10, 10:45   Link #39286
Eratas123
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I only brought up karma when you complained about it. Though I will make a fake action prologue by making it look like they really got shot.....then Tatenashi cheers that they won and the guys would be the one paying for ice cream afterwards. The beggining chapter does look sociopathic since the details are intentionally obscure and gory, but then it turns funny when the reader realizes it's just Ichika overdramatizing.. I made a similar draft with Irish and Karon role acting in a play once. Senpai should remember it.

@ Senpai - Wait, are they still human?
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