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Originally Posted by sasahar17
Now I really wonder what the heck’s going on… any chance this will end up compiled somewhere where I can read it all in one sitting. I feel like the answer is staring me in the face, but because it’s broken up in the thread I can’t put the puzzle together.
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- I'll eventually pool it all into one fic on fanfiction.net. The main reason I'm doing it in drips and drops here on the forum is because I know there's a few guys here who'll call me out and correct anything I mess up.
And one of the main reasons it's a mess is because I rewrote this segment I think close to a dozen times or more. A lot of ideas and sections just got thrown out, like removing nearly all references to the YF-23
(Because of what happened in TE). I also had to excise huge amounts of text because I was going too far with the tech descriptions and the story/feel was suffering due to it.
I wouldn't say that the fic idea has done a 180 since I first started it, but it is a very different story from when I first thought it up. I'm still going for the Yukikaze feel and some of the themes, but I want to do something that doesn't just look like "Muv-Luv Yukikaze" or something as contrived/cut-and-paste as that.
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Originally Posted by Alastor Mobius Toth
Spoiler for Rated for Tarisa being Tarisa.
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- I'm surprised there's no "Cossack" insults...