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*Hates being a word processor, but finds grammr being the only thing "wrong".*
I feel like I'm being disrespectful every time I do point out these things. Or hypocrticial...but, none~the~less.
A few small points.
- I'm certain you don't mean to say "Eva-chin."
- "hurted her": Either I'm wrong or you, but I'm pretty sure it's "hurt" here. I don't think hurted is a word.
- What kind of person is her?: I'm sure this is "she" here.
After that, I'd have to re-read to touch another point I think I missed...nope, can't see it.
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