@Nanya: Nice, as always. I'm not going to side either way on the Scrya clan thing, as it's your work and you can do what you want with it.
@Alavon: Thank you.
@Satashi: I'll remember that for later, and I'll repost the fic once I go over it again. Probably some time tonight. All I'm really looking for is a small review saying "That was good" or "That sucked" or the like, like every other fic posted here gets.
I can ask questions on how to improve my writing with that information.