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@ Demi - I accidentally made all the kids 7 for first 2 chapters  I should've made Charles and Rin Jr 10 at least. |
Hah, just retcon it. It's still early, just tell the reader the concept just matured recently, and show them why.
Or just use Demi's idea.
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@ Senpai - Too bad he doesn't have the Imagine breaker  One punch equals getting a girlfriend  Has Dan ever been asked out in your story? |
Nope, that's what he's implied about in chapter 11. I guess the festival is somewhat a "Throw the bone" moment.
On a slightly ironic note, Setsura is burning when activated as 'plasma claw', its on his left arm.
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Side note - The main thing they're really calling BS on is the fact that Kyuukai gets wings and a modified gun in order to fight the IS. Irish gets a modified butter knife and a some kind of jumpsuit yet does relatively fine as well. Irish even mocks the concept by asking if they were expecting him to be some kind of male IS pilot |
I'm going to roll on my floor later.
