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Old 2012-10-10, 13:44   Link #349
Von Himmel
Join Date: Jan 2006
Location: Dollars
Originally Posted by Wild Goose View Post
I'm not really keen on harem hijinks. Call me old fashioned, but I have a preference for monogamous relationships.

That said, PaulXion really needs a BETA reader; it's decent enough but a few words here and there make me cringe. Also, decent end to that arc.

And I think I'll stop reading, since I still haven't finished the trilogy, and haven't reached the despair stage yet
I think I can agree with that, especially the the first few chapters of this story When I read it for the very first time, I thought it was made by a very incompetent writer.. but for some reasons, they just stick. I was so absorbed into it that I didn't realize I already got to Sadogashima arc and almost forgot to sleep

I think he's like Takeru in this story in a way... looks incompetent, but still manage to catch the heart of the people (or reader in our cases )

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