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That was an excellent chapter Kaijo. The way everything seemed to be going right for our heroes, only to come around against them in the end was superb writing. And more combat would be delicious.
Otto and Arf really stole the spotlight for me. And nice job with the bomb, I wasn't expecting that little twist and it worked out really well.
And I can't wait to see more of the baddies' motives. =3
Well done comrade. I'm looking forward to the continuation.
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