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Old 2012-07-20, 10:48   Link #71
DurararaFTW
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Originally Posted by willx View Post
One thing I noticed that was a bit weird is .. having started watching the anime and reading Aria of the Starless Night .. and then going back and reading Volume 1 ..

I have to admit some of Asuna's dialogue seems a bit off! I know Vol 1 was written before the SS, but doesn't it seem a bit awkward? Asuna describes that "sleeping on the grass moment" almost as if it was the first time she met Kirito!

I really like this author's work, but the SS inserts that add scenes and characters sometimes seems to interrupt the flow. The whole "I realized then that this person is living a life here in SAO" seems silly when she already met him and was given cream to put on her bread over a year prior to that.

EDITED: Oh, and not to mention the whole bath thing and that other stuff -- it just seems a tad contradictory!
Indeed, the author is apparently going release an edited versio of the Aincrad arc that does accomodate for Aria.
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