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Old 2013-01-02, 19:29   Link #2367
Sansker
Manus ad Ferrum
 
 
Join Date: Dec 2012
Location: Costa Rica
Age: 33
I say they are both amazing, so by definition you did agree with me there Lhklan. And I know the author decides what to put in, what I have been trying to say is this: add other styles could help to make the story even a little more rich. And yes, if a writer can't figure out how to fit an element with the story is really incompetent. Our author already mention the 800 types magic but he could not make them play a role, so really why he even bother with that? I can’t help to wonder. And I do write fanfiction, I know isn’t easy to write a story but when you sell your story then you better expect to be criticize.

Magic, lazy writing… is funny how both can be so similar in times like this when there isn’t a clear explanation. Just saying. I was under the impression defensive spells are all visible, but I could be wrong so what is an example of an invisible barrier? Unless you mean the ones on the Barrier Jacket which still look like armor so I really don’t know. If you could help me with that Keroko will be great. And I do say the golems on season 1 look more efficient than the soldiers of the TSAB so I will have to wonder how effective armies really are in the Nanoha universe. And I don’t think we need to see Lutecia and the Witch fight just to get other styles, we had plenty of opportunities to see them prior to that.
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