Volume 03 Chapter 06 ("Dream Evil") Part Two
There, split it (stupid brain-addled forum software). I already see about a dozen major points to rewrite in my next pass but the point of a rough draft is to get some kind of basic structure on the page. I have a few people reading my rewrite of volume one and two now -- I like hearing how they aren't bored rereading because enough has changed and improved in the depth and details.
One of my aunts is reading it now (she turned 80 this week, woot) ... she's an avid and really picky reader and she says she's getting attached to the characters and finds herself reading longer each night than intended.