Ok then .. On first look .. there's nothing wrong with it, its an ok sig .. but definitely could be improves on
:- Its too bright IMO, the BG... while its nothing wrong, it gets to you after a while
:- its a little bit heavy on the right. A simple solution is to shift some weight to the left by staggering the text.. What I mean is, move the text a bit to the left and instead of having S (in Saotome) right under G(in Genma), move the 2nd name so the S is under N/M.. moves it to bottom left just a bit ... Then, if able, moves the BG panda a bit more to the center .. This is just a compositional advice, things that naturally came with practice, heck, I sometime have problem with sig composition as well
I'm a bit curious .. is the BG bamboo a pic? or is it brushing? If its a brush, care to tell me where you get it?