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Originally Posted by ganbaru
Anyway, I reworked my entry; corrected some pixels on the render and changed the text for something more meaningfull ( even if my translation d not fully satisfie me ). C&C would be welcome.
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The English text should say "More than 6 years have pass
ed, and I haven't met her again." in order to be grammatically correct. I just noticed that the top of her head looks flat and cut off. The top should be rounder to look more natural.