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Originally Posted by Sam the Onion
Here to update little bit.
Fic nearing completition. 2 chapters and epilogue till finish. Expecting to be finished at 90k words. But that doesn't include the fact that I want to rewrite the beginning of the story.
This is my first time writing seriously something so after 70k words you can expect anyone to improve at some level, I will just transfer everything learned to the beginning too.
I must have missed something in basic child education  First time hearing about a talk like that  I had no idea what talk this was about before I actually read the fic 
Well I've been pretty careful
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Definetly
the talk is every teen's nightmare
You're lucky you never had to go through it. I was submitted to it when I was 14 >.< Poor Nanoha, though, he talk was "elightening" , which means she learned things lol. The question that she asked her mom was originally in the story but I took it out at the last moment XP
Spoiler for spoilerz answered:
Fate's family is very well off, but the parents wanted their children to have normal lives. Fate and Precia are well known in a certain community. Someone like Nanoha would have no reason to know them, but magazines and advertisement agencies would know that the people they talk about ( movie stars, pop-stars, ect) go to "Testarossa Touch". So to them the Testarossa family is very valuable. Kind of like how people buy name brand stuff just because someone famous does. Advertisement people use Testaross Touch to sell their things. Nanoha being sponsored by them means an outlet to reach into the teenage group and sell to them. That's why the people wanted Nanoha, no matter how inexperianced she was......... I should make this known in the fic as well. I'll have to add that in, in chapter 8.
As for Nanoha. Denial isn't just a river in Egypt
As for Fate...... Jealousy isn't very fun. >: D