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Originally Posted by LVD
I think we've fixed it. It doesn't sound as awkward, at least, which is all that really matters to me if the general meaning comes through. I think. I don't know, I should be sleeping right now. <_>;
SO, here.
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Uwaa~ It's all sparkly and clean. NICE. :O
And, yes, that line is much better than mine was. orz
Thanks for doing this,
LVD raizoo. I hope it wasn't too much trouble.
>_>
/nitpick
1. Rein does call Hayate "Meister." I promise.
2. On page 22, two wordbubbles have their words switched. The bottom-right and top-left.
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Originally Posted by Seraph42
Thank You  |
You're welcome.
...k, I'm gonna go mess with firefox now. :<