[Satsumaru]

Spoiler for @C.A:

For me, your entry made the best impression. I like how you focused on the characters upper bodies, because thats generally where a romantic mood is emphasised the most(Imo anyways lol).

There are some bits off about the drawing itself, but that all goes down the anatomy issue. For example I think the hands are in general too small, and the left forearm of the girl on Our right side looks a bit too thin etc etc.

But yeah... I guess I was more captivated by the mood of the drawing, noticing slight technical mistakes came secondary. The drawing made a good first impression. And I think impression and mood matter more than technical stuff like getting the anatomy down 100% etc XD;

Spoiler for @HayashiTakara:

Ohhh, I'm guessing thats Mocca chan and Tsukune kun I think this entry is rather awesome too. Its the only one with colour, and that does make it stand out Your drawings skills are very good, and you have good skills with drawing anatomy.

However, I get the feeling that this drawing is composed in a very plain layout. In other words, I think the composition/arrangement of the drawings make the piece seem very broken up. I also have to say, there is a lot of white/unused space in this piece.

I think the drawing would have had a greater effect if you had omitted the bottom drawing, and arranged the top 3 with emphasised focus on the kissing drawing.

Spoiler for @yuuk1:

Your drawing style is rather cute, which I like However I think the drawing lacks attention to detail if its to be compared with the other 2 entries. By that I simply meant you did not add shading to emphasis any details etc

The arrangement of the drawing seems a bit odd. Upon closer inspection, I realise you Did try to make the drawing look like a photo. But I think that effect would be greater if you were to give the photo an edge or two, so we could see where the content of the photo and the photo paper cuts off etc. I think the highly saturated pinkish red is unfitting. Even tho the theme is love kiss and romantic based, a background colour like that did look odd to me, perhaps it is just me.

I do like how you've blurred the more unimportant areas and put focus on their faces by not blurring them. That was a good technique used