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Old 2009-01-24, 22:20   Link #1029
Shinigami_Mello
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Alright. She's been playing through it now and wanted to add some typo's she's noticed =)

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After the opening movie of Episode 1 plays, the word "to" is missing from the following sentence: "It used to be we had sway and rock on the way". Shouldn't "to" be before "sway"?"

And there is a hyphen missing right after that. It should be "half-day trip". And in the beginning chapter, it should be "high-class bed".

And in the TIPS for the seven stakes in Episode 1, there is a comma missing near the end, after the part about a person with strong magical powers.

It should also be "well-rested" in the description for Episode 2 on the main menu.

Oh, and during the first twilight, when Battler talks about his dad going to hell, he calls him a "son of b****". The "a" is missing. There might be hyphens missing too.
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