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Originally Posted by DJ_RockmanX
Hmm. On the topic if more shoujo-esque influences, we could modify the sci-fi elements a bit to make it flow a bit better. The only other thing I have is "sailor girls" should be "magical girls".
Otherwise, we're doing good.
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I did the "sailor girls" line on purpose... you can refer to mahou shoujo like that too...
I also simply added some more traditionally feminine things, but due to Kyon-ko being a tsundere, I can imagine her being into "guy stuff" too...
You can change what you want if you see fit, too.
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Originally Posted by DannyCat
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Perfect exchange there. That's exactly what I'm going for here.