2012-12-22, 23:45
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Originally Posted by StratoSpear
I'm working with some inconsistencies in the past chapters, it'll be up once I reviewed all ten chapters of the first arc and everything's in line.
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Okay. And here's another bit I have.
Spoiler for Manned Machines:
Ichika watches as the Silverback he attacked falls in front of him.
With it now lying on the ground completely motionless, Ichika reverted his katana to its normal state.
“Did you use the barrier void attack on him, Ichika-san?”
Cecilia landed close behind him to have a closer look at the Silverback they were both fighting.
“No, I didn’t use it. So these are the Silverbacks huh?”
Ichika took a closer look as a scanner appeared on his Heads Up Display.
“If that’s all they’ve got, then so much for them being a match up to the 3rd generation ISes.”
Cecilia twirled her hair as she gloated over there win in that skirmish.
“Hold on…”
[Life Signs Detected]
“Oh crap.”
Ichika whispered as he scanned the Silverback he downed and he looked at the two Silverbacks Houki, Rin and Charlotte are looking at.
“Are you guys getting anything from those two?”
Rin had a keen look on her face as she examined the larger Silverback of the two that are close to each other.
“Yeah, I’m getting life signs from this one.”
“This one as well.”
Charlotte she picked up one of the Silverback’s weapons as she looked at the smaller one.
“Laura, what about the one you ha—aah!”
Charlotte saw Laura using her energy wires to hold the Silverback she downed and to her surprised she has him hogtied and using the energy wires to carry it.
“I got a life reading here, too.”
Laura took another close look at the Silverback she’s carrying.
“But they all seem to be unconscious, and I’m not getting any energy readings from any of the suits.”
“So, we’ve been fighting manned machines and not drones…”
Houki thought back on the fight to try to see if they showed any signs of human qualities during the fight.
“Now that you mentioned it Houki…”
Ichika cut her off while she’s in thought.
“While I was attacking one of these Silverbacks, this one I downed tackled me to protect him, and the Silverback that I was fighting with before is the one Laura’s carrying.”
“And he also shot me a few times while I was charging up my railgun before he tackled you..”
“Another thing is that this big one here, tried to break off of me and Houki-san after Laura fired her railgun.”
“Same goes when I downed this one here.”
Charlotte pointed the smaller one out as she examined the weapon she picked up.
“He tried to break off of you two so he can get to either one of them…”
“Hmph.”
Ichika took a quick look at the 4 Silverbacks.
“Unmanned machines don’t do that.”
Now that the IS pilots know that the Silverbacks are manned machines, they’re checking on them if they’re pilots are okay.
“Ichika, even though they’re unconscious, all of their vitals are okay.”
“Yeah, but we have to be careful, Charlotte. We don’t really know anything about these Silverbacks.”
“One thing we know is that they can’t really match up to the IS~”
Rin, like Cecilia, couldn’t help but sing song their victory as they’re looking over the 2 Silverbacks she, Houki and Charlotte downed.
“Rin-chan, even so, there are still humans in those suits. We could’ve killed them…”
“Mu-u-u-ur~”
Slightly annoyed, Rin continued looking over the Silverbacks while Houki has a curious look on her face.
“So what are we going to do with them?”
“We should bring them over to the instructors to handle them. Right now, let’s check on what we’re really here for.”
“Hm.”
Houki nodded in agreement.
“I’ll check on the rouge IS, you guys watch those Silverbacks.”
“””””Right.”””””
The reason why they’re at Ishiyama High is because of the rogue IS. And when the security teams failed to stop it, they were sent out to pursue it.
As Ichika reached the rogue IS, multiple ear piercing sounds ringed through the campus grounds.
“Ah!...”
Hearing the sounds, Ichika turned around to see smoke clouds where the other 5 IS pilots and the Silverbacks are.
Sensing trouble, Ichika dashed back to them.
As he’s heading back, his IS picked up 3 additional energy signatures mixed in with Houki, Cecilia, Rin, Charlotte and Laura.
I might've gotten the honorifics wrong with the Canon characters. But my main concern is them being in character...
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