Sometimes minor editor
Join Date: Jun 2009
Location: East Coast US
Age: 36
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Spoiler for September the Fifth, Day 4: Hallway- Stop Stalking Me!:
Stop Stalking Me!
"I grab my bag, and follow Haruhi. I don’t want Koizumi showing up at my house anytime soon, after all. He’d be a bad influence on my sister."
"As I head out of the classroom and round the corner, however…"
Haruhi "What do you think you’re doing?"
"She was waiting for me around the corner. How did she know…?"
Haruhi "The clubroom is the other way."
Kyon "Um. I’m taking the scenic route."
Haruhi "Whatever. Just go tell the others there’s no meeting today."
"And with, that she heads off towards the stairs."
"…"
[DECISION POINT HERE]
[I’m going to try something interesting to spice things up a bit throughout this scene. The first options will continue the scene; the second will redirect the player to Notice of Termination.]
1) Keep following her.
2) Right, I’ll go do what I’m told.
"I gave her a few minutes, then continued to trace her footsteps."
"However, at the top of the stairs/:"
Haruhi "…Why are you following me?"
Kyon "I’m not. We just happen to be going in the same direction."
"Haruhi’s eye twitches. I don’t think this is working."
"Without a word, she turns her back to me and heads down the staircase."
"…"
[DECISION POINT HERE]
1) Keep following her.
2) I guess I should go tell the others, then.
"And, at the bottom of the stairs…"
Haruhi "Okay, this is… you’re stupid, Kyon. Can’t you see I want to be left alone?"
"She managed to see me from my position behind the fire extinguisher. Not that I expected that to work, though."
"Haruhi, looking more frustrated than ever, stalks off angrily towards the shoe lockers."
"This isn’t going very well… I think a haggard Koizumi will be showing up at my front door no matter what I do right now."
"…"
[DECISION POINT HERE]
1) Keep following her.
2) Should probably tell the others, and tell my mother to prepare for guests on Sunday.
"And so, at the shoe lockers…"
Haruhi "Arrrgh! Seriously, stop stalking me!"
"I merely took my shoes out, ignoring her angry words."
"Haruhi, fuming, heads off towards the school entrance."
"There’s only one thing I can do now."
[DECISION POINT HERE]
1) Keep following her.
2) Brace for impact! Also, go tell the others there’s no meeting today.
"Finally, at the school entrance, we have Haruhi, looking as though she’s about to choke me."
Haruhi "Do you know how aggravating it is when a subordinate doesn’t follow orders? It’s really aggravating! Subordinates aren’t allowed to take initiative! Exactly what are you trying to do?"
Kyon "Well, I—"
Haruhi "Whatever you’re going to say is stupid, so I won’t be listening to it, anyway. See you on Monday, Kyon."
"…"
[DECISION POINT HERE]
1) Yeah, see you then.
2) …I just wanted to ask you if you wanted to walk home together.
Responsibility Zero
Kyon "Yeah, see you then."
Haruhi "Hmmph."
"Even though we go the same way home, I’m not about to continue to follow her after all that. I guess I’ll go tell everyone about the meeting being canceled, and then head home after I’m sure she’s long gone."
"…I feel a slight pang of guilt, but I suppress it. She was angry to begin with, and since when is it my job to keep Haruhi happy?"
"…Don’t answer that."
My Desperate Gamble
"Ah, crap. If I don’t do something quick, we’re going to be in trouble."
"Here goes my one last, desperate gamble!"
Kyon "Wait! I only wanted to ask if you wanted to walk home together!"
"Haruhi spins around."
Haruhi "Wh--!"
Kyon "I, uh, figured since there wasn’t a meeting today, and that since we go the same way for quite a bit…"
Haruhi "…"
"She seemed to deliberate on it for a few moments, and then…"
Haruhi "Fine. Let’s hurry, then. I have stuff to do at home."
"…It worked. I can’t believe it."
Haruhi "…Idiot."
"Yes, it is true. I am an idiot."
Meant to include this with the last post...
Spoiler for Suggestions for stargazing event:
Virgo
The Moon (Specifically, the Celtic Moon Goddess, but I dunno if we care that much...)
Various planetary symbols...
EDIT: Also, I seem to be caught up.
EDIT2: OhgodsMYBRAIN http://bit.ly/1oIZsF (NSFW... but not due to sexual content. Not really, at least. Just... weird.)
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Shadow takes all, my pet;
My what a strange duet.
Shadow takes all.
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Last edited by scify; 2009-09-23 at 10:12.
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