[Futaba-chan]

Originally Posted by fignae

Spoiler for episode 4 (Futaba-chan's synopses):

I can't see where Aaeru says that she loves to fly. Morinas asks her if she still wants to continue, and Aaeru replies with, "Only by riding a Simoun together can we learn whether we make suitable partners, isn't it Morinas who said that?"

I got that bit wrong; I'll update the copy that was posted to reflect this.

Originally Posted by fignae

Spoiler for episode 4:

Futaba-chan, I like how your synopses are interpretative and not just factual, but this I want to disagree with. I don't think Guragief looks "highly annoyed" here.

Spoiler for episode 4:

Hmm, certainly not "highly." "Annoyed," perhaps? "Wry?"

Originally Posted by fignae

Spoiler for episode 4:

I read that as "If it's me [Morinas], is it so bad?" The difference being, does Aaeru want to kiss someone else.

Another spot that I'll go back and correct; thanks!

Originally Posted by fignae

Spoiler for episode 4:

Hmm, neither of my subs mentioned pretty face. "Karakau" = "揶揄う" = to make fun of. In full, she's still a little kid, you don't have to make fun of her.

Spoiler for episode 4:

Oh! Okay... I misheard that as "kawaii kao".

Originally Posted by fignae

Spoiler for episode 4:

Rimone's on the arrogant side, isn't she? Not "saint", though, but "genius". Whoops, in Rimone's case, "prodigy".

Thank you so much for the feedback... my Japanese is very limited, and I'm really glad for any help from anyone who understands the dialogue better. I'd appreciate it very much if you'd be willing to correct my mistakes in further synopsis attempts as the season progresses.

Did I make any errors in episode 3?