Thank you so much. The critiques are much appreciated
I'm a stickler for fixing typos so I'll have to go back and nab that one tonight. If you notice any others please let me know. I'm a Hemingway lover as well but I've been trying to stray from the extra long sentences as of late. I'll have to go back over those old chapters and see if I can't fix them up a bit. Thanks again for taking the time to read it
*thumbs way up*
P.S: Matsumoto and Gin are most definitely pure win
