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Originally Posted by Darknemo2000
And again you are discussing the plot of volume 4. and as I said the plot was ok, the problem was how it was written. The sentences felt sometimes too choppy and short or sometimes too long, sometimes the meaning was very hard to trace and some dialogues (like Montmorency's) felt too forced, not really blending with a real character.
As for the plot and scenes - they were pretty nice, but the way it was written it was really one of the worst volumes in ZnT novels...
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Ahh so you are talking about sentence structures and stuff that is only seen through the eyes of those translating it lol
I'm sure those who read the translations don't have as much insight into poorly written japanese sentences as would those translating them.
Also so you are the only person right now translating it lol? I know Serenade is taking a break but wow very low on translators!